Charlie says nobody's got the strange and hidden power
Friday, October 24th, 2003 02:39 amSo, the paper from two weeks ago? The one I opened the book for at three a.m. and wrote in about four hours? Apparently it was "tremendously impressive."
"I probably don't need to tell you that your writing is outstanding; I'm sure you know already. The only weakness I detect is some incoherence between paragraphs. Rather than tie them securely together, you tend to shift gears to new topics with some inattention to what came before. In terms of content, I'm equally impressed, though I do wish you had dug a bit deeper into Cronon's basic assumptions. [ . . . ]"
Grade: 92 (A). Oy. This, then, is not the paper that forces me out of my self-destructive procrastinating spiral. Better luck next time. But thanks for playing our game.
silentfire: hey, that's great
silentfire: . . . right?
walkingshadow: well, yes
walkingshadow: just
walkingshadow: the mind boggles
I did allude to "Miniver Cheevy" though. Go me.
Phonetics quiz tomorrow that, hey, I haven't studied for. Though really, she gives those quizzes away, so there's actually no need to bother. Then I will find examples of negatives in cartoon strips for my Modern English Structure class, and my Friday will be complete. Around here, every week is a week to celebrate the end of.
"I probably don't need to tell you that your writing is outstanding; I'm sure you know already. The only weakness I detect is some incoherence between paragraphs. Rather than tie them securely together, you tend to shift gears to new topics with some inattention to what came before. In terms of content, I'm equally impressed, though I do wish you had dug a bit deeper into Cronon's basic assumptions. [ . . . ]"
Grade: 92 (A). Oy. This, then, is not the paper that forces me out of my self-destructive procrastinating spiral. Better luck next time. But thanks for playing our game.
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I did allude to "Miniver Cheevy" though. Go me.
Phonetics quiz tomorrow that, hey, I haven't studied for. Though really, she gives those quizzes away, so there's actually no need to bother. Then I will find examples of negatives in cartoon strips for my Modern English Structure class, and my Friday will be complete. Around here, every week is a week to celebrate the end of.